Okay, you asked for long, informative reviews. I hope to fulfill that.The style, with the very short lines, is very good. If it were any different, the flow would be off, and I doubt this poem would be half as good, nor would it have the same affect. The "plot" is kind of creepy, but in an awesome way. The choice of words are great. But the coolest thing is probably the italicized parts. It feels like a nice little emphasis on these few little things. It's a beautiful poem, so... Great job!