This is a fantastic poem. I know this feeling... It's easy to relate to yet people NEVER write about. Awesome, keep writing ^_^

I know exactly how you feel you are an amazing poet at such a young age keep it up!

OH MY GOD! I felt EXACTLY like this when I broke up with my ex. You expressed your feelings perfectly. Excellant work!

~Black and White Dreams~

"Love is good in feeling, even if you are always being hurt. It is better to be hurt by love than not loving at all."

great poem, and that's about all i can say. and if the other quote doesn't work for you, try this one-

"Who needs love when you've got a gun?"

:D