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| hateandkill-D 2006-06-03 ch 1,  | abuseCool. I like how you express finding your self and that you're not part of the crowd. I love it. Nicely done. Keep it up and never quit! |
| Pont 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuseAnother triumph. I think I'll bookmark you for later visitation, I love your style. This poem comes across good and strong, using an old topic but in a very new and interesting way that really grabbed and kept my attention. You're really something different! Just a few suggestionsLine 22: 'To tall to ever be one of the crowd' I think it should be 'too' instead of 'to' :) I just adore this poem. Very well written, keep up the excellent work! ~Ponteh |
| the nonexistant 2006-05-19 ch 1, | abuseWoah, I love this! Great job! I love the feeling of strength as you find it within you and tell of what you were and how you're finding it. "Scratching the surface" I love that. Great work! Keep it up! |
| KingdomRain 2006-05-05 ch 1, | abusehehe i got to say, this actually fits you well. for the most part anyways. all in all i liked it. anyways write on! |