|Reviews for Hope|
| Pont 5/23/06 . chapter 1
Wow, great use of alliteration, inserting Camus and Poe in there. A very thoughtful and well-planned poem.
Just one or two little things that I noticed,Line 10: 'And the sun sets' I'm not entirely certain that this is a mistake, but I thought I'd point it out, as it feels a little awkward.
Line 14: 'When the sunrises will it free me?' I believe you meant to put a space between 'sun' and 'rises' ;)
I love the formatting choices, too, the cascading feel and your good feel for rhythm really made the piece for me. Nicely done! Really leaves the reader thinking.
| the nonexistant 5/18/06 . chapter 1
I like it. Nice job with this.
| KingdomRain 5/15/06 . chapter 1
interesting... but i like it...
| strawberry memories 4/29/06 . chapter 1
it's like the story of Pandora's box. You know, the one where she lets everything bad and horrible escape from a magical box given to her by the gods, except for one thing: hope.
This is a wonderful poem, set on stilts by such a depressing topic. You did an amazing job! Keep up the great work!