Wow, this is origional (and that sincerly of course).This was something I was really drawn to. You have this unique style of writing, that I have never experienced before. Very personal and intreguing to read. Perhaps I can make a suggestion of removing the "**" and replacing some of the colloqueal wording with something more elloquent. Or perhaps this adds to the quirks of your style, I'm not sure. Anyway, sorry for ramboling, but I enjoyed the read, thank you.

"Oppression will teach you to be a man" - Or a woman! I loved your opening line as well. I've missed your sarcastic spins; your brash "I just don't give a **" poetry. Great job.

Much love,Juliet.