Reviews for i can't help it - FictionPress.com

mormonboy 2006-10-25 ch 1,	abuseThis is cool. I like it.
onyxdragonflyy 2006-05-03 ch 1,	abuseAH! This is going in my favs!! I love the style, I love how it's written! I love it all!! And here again.. that last line! It got me again! lol.. Keep writting! You're words are awesome!!
AlterEthereal 2006-04-29 ch 1,	abusedude yeah. :[ fp.com hates my formatting sometimes, too, and then i have to change it and i'm all ARGH!! on the bright side, i like this one a lot anyway. actually, the dots kinda do something for the whole "turning corners" concept. m. oh yeah, and Stick It was completely great. XD i don't feel like a dork for wanting to see it anymore, it was so good. you've gotta go see it.
SomewhereShortOfAnIdiot 2006-04-29 ch 1,	abuseOh no, no. The format, I feel, really adds to the poem. It's very visual poetry, so simple and yet extremely beautiful.Favourited :)