Corrections in () those things...dunno how to spell them...

For her, it meant only one thing(:) death.

Her name is(was) Lillian and she is(was) a nymph.

simple white dress she worse(wore)

Her duty, (duty was) to protect her village and watch over them forever.

White rose peddles I think it's pedals. Might not be, though.

it was for the clan(,) and would assure them safety for the rest of their lives.

In giving her pure life to the gods, it would assure the village everything it needs to survive.Tis a little confusing...the wording of it...

And he had no say in the matter,(;) the village had decided upon it.

Always as a child(,) she had been given certain things that no other could receive.

Her life was all built up to dying(. And) and to her that was not a life at all.

GOD DAMN YOU AND THE CLIFFHANGERS! T.T

oh...kanna's story tis good so far...you had better continue...

-Kamo

I like it!:D Can't wait to see what happens next!

I like your idea so far, and your details as well. Keep up the good work! ~Waterhealer