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| JillElaine 2006-09-21 ch 2,  | abuseOoh...Brendan AND Benjy like her...I think I can see where this is going...What? this is all you have so far? Now I'm mad. Please update soon!! |
| JillElaine 2006-09-21 ch 1, | abuseI've read the first chapter and I'm hooked already! This is a really interesting story, how'd you think of the idea? Will be reading more... |
| derisive snort 2006-04-29 ch 1, | abusethis is good. good personalities, I like how they're distict and not stereo'typical. and that whole 'good' thing cracked me up. update soon! |
| Kantessa 2006-04-29 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, I LOVE it. If you don't write another chapter, and soon, I will be very upset, and might just have to hurt you. Wow, I love the ex-fat kid, and her poor glitter-glued skirt. I guess the only possible improvement would be to vary the tones of the different characters, and use different vocabulary and senses. But hey, I'm not the genius here. =D |