its nice, not bad, pretty good. but not as good as some of yours so i dont understand what so many people see in it. but oh well.

anyway i read your introduction. and although i nag and nag you in person i guess i will just have to let you know on this, i wish for you to review all my work i could list them.

p.s i will list them next time if i havent been reviewed :p

I love the concept of music, the way you embodied it, as if it were so many things at once. brilliant poem.

thanks for the review too! and yeah, now that I read it through... the "heart" repetition is...queer.

) write on!

wow! i've been reading some of your stuff and i really like it. keep posting!

This is gorgeous, love it so much. The words are so laugh. it makes sense!

Wrenching... some music can do that to you...

Cassabdra

wow, now that one was GOOD. awesome, really. i loved it, and i think its probably one of your best. have i added you to my favorites yet? no? woa, whats wrong with me? well, youre there now :)

i, like the other reviewer thought it was about water or drowning or something. not sure why, but i kept reading, and i liked how the last line told what it was about. if you had put some musical properties, i think they said, then i dont think it wouldve been as good, because for me the last line is a surprise. and surprises are good, especially when youre just reading, thinking 'okay...water...' and then theres 'music' at the very end. i dont know how to explain it, but theres what i thought.

i dont know if youve ever read my profile, but at the very end, i always have a quote. some of them are random, from famous people, and ive had a line from an author from here, once. so, anyways, i was wondering if youd let me use a line from this poem to put there. of course, id put a link to you and your poem, but the quote wont be there for that long. the lines i was thinking were - "It invades me gently soothes me softly and then it's over. The journey ends. The next set of tender arms open, and I continue. My endless falling, into the depths of music." of course, its fine if you dont want me to use it. just tell me 'no, i dont want you to use it' and i wont. tell me 'yes, sure' and i will. and if you want me to use different lines, okay, sure.

keep on writing M.W. Renaee-::-

Originally, I was afraid this was going to be about drowning, and I almost wanted to click out. But it was *so* captivating, I kept reading, and was very glad to discover that it was about music's power over the soul. My only comment was- it was really sudden. You had no clue what the poem was about until the last line. Maybe if you gave allusions to musical properties along the way. :) Otherwise, very yummy! Keep writin'! bella

Ooh, tres cool, Scrunchy. Me likes. Heh, I don't even know why I'm laughing now, I just am. Because I'm special. Heh, music. Well, erm... I liked it! Keep up the great work and write on! (Heh, I'm starting to become more like Meg. God, save me now!)

hmm... I like this. It's cool. Write On!