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| Ofinterest 2007-05-16 ch 1,  | abuseI like how you defined their personalities so clearly even though the story was so short. Just the way that they moved and the quick notes on how each man felt spoke volumes abot the characters, made me actually see and connect to them. Of course, your description talents are pretty great as well. In short, well done. |
| cormorant 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abuseO.OYou never told me about this one...*thumbs* |