Hey... thanks so much for the spirit-lifting review. It was right there when I needed it, in fact I even think it was worded nicer than my poem! Anyways, it means a lot, thank you.

Now, to this excellent poem. Wow, I loved every line, it competed yet completed the one before it, simply a pleasure to read. I agree, nice and light. I also feel like this often, amazingly easy to relate too. I think the first line is wonderful, it lures us into your world of careless, yet poised thoughts revolving until we reach the end. We experience you, there is nothing like it. It is always poems like these I hate to finish. "Usually..." what a fabulous word, and you have made it so much better.

You sound like a great person with great talent. I hope you continue writing for a long time, and always know that there are people who believe in you. Keep it up & I hope you are doing well.

Write on,-Em

P.S. I dislike short reviews as well :)

I love the repitition of usually. It appeals to me. ^_^ And I like the how at the end you say, "but not usually." This is very nicely written. Keep writing!

Hey. To remove the "double spacing", you backspace and then press shift and hit enter. It is important that you press shift or the spacing will be double spaced again. So in between stanzas you only press enter.

By the way, I like the way you work your poem around the concept of "usually". It's something rather different.