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merrymowmow 2007-04-09 ch 8,	abuseI was wondering when you're going to update?
jammi_gurl 2007-03-15 ch 8, anon.	abuseheyhey! this story is great! I sorta expected 2 ppl to come straight out n like each other.. hahah but now i find like 3 ppl liking the same person.. ahh.. u noe.. probably it progresses into a love triangle? ahhaha or mayb there r 2 couples huh? ahhahah yeah well.. the plot keeps me thinking.. which is cool! ahah do update soon!! haha cya
SapphireIris 2007-02-13 ch 8,	abuseDance Dance Revolution!! Hee hee, they're all good friends now. Now it's time for you to update again! Did I mention that I love your ch. titles, by the way? Tee hee. Nice twist, too, with the Jasper-devouring-everything. So get on with it, eh? And... update! -SapphireIris
Gaki Toki 2007-02-10 ch 8,	abuseWOOT I LOVE IT! Let's get to some three-some action already though. And I still don't know about Sage yet...he's kind of on my "iffy" side if you know what I mean. Anyways, I'm so glad you updated! I'm always so psyched when people update I always have to review them ASAP...which isn't very fast sometimes but it'll do right? Haha. Gaki
Jordan Storm 2006-11-13 ch 7,	abuseinteresting, please continue? please? it will be fun to see who gets Ashton in the end!
xAngel of SorrowX 2006-11-10 ch 7,	abuseThis was a cool chapter! Although I don't understand the title...it sounds like 'murder', to me. looks it up online OH! It's "misfortune", right? Well, what happened to Sage is pretty unfortunate... it was funny in the gym, though, when the two were being protective of Ashton and telling him all the precautions that he needs to take. I hope Sage gets better, Ashton doesn't get raped, and that you update soon!
Gaki Toki 2006-11-10 ch 7,	abuseHEY! I love it when you mention me, I feel special. Ren: Oh my...oh my...Sage, you need better friends. And I know why he lies so much! BECAUSE I HATE HIM! Jason: You have issues. Ren: Maybe he has a bad homelife. Oh well, update soon, we gotta go.
SapphireIris 2006-11-10 ch 7,	abuseAha!! We've got a little love square... no longer a triangle. I still want to know what's up with their eyes, though. And I think Sage deserved getting his ** beat. "Bad Sage!" hehe. Keep writing!! -SapphireIris
SapphireIris 2006-11-04 ch 6,	abuseHello! I like this story. And if I like it, it has to be good. I still want to know why their eyes are funky colored, though. Could you please get to that soon? Yes, I know I've been gone, but now I'm back. So ha! Now you HAVE to update!! -SapphireIris
xAngel of SorrowX 2006-11-01 ch 6,	abuseLMAO! Camdyn sounds awesome (if a bit weird...)! Poor Ashton...lol. This was a cool chapter! Awesomeness! I can't wait to read more, so please update soon! You're a review , I'm an updated stories . we're even. ^_^
Jordan Storm 2006-10-03 ch 6,	abuselol, cool stuff, please continue when you get the chance!
thunderbolt and lightning 2006-09-09 ch 6,	abusehey i enjoyed all of your reent updates but im to lazy to put a review in all of them i hope you keep writing blackbirds song and no remedy and all of your stories there all so good
Gaki Toki 2006-09-06 ch 6,	abuseWant more...now...I want more of this right now.
firestar267 2006-06-21 ch 5,	abuseThis is a really good chapter, liked it because of the whole message it carries - "There’s no such thing as a part-time friend.” you have no idea how much i agree with that! Great chapter, keep it up and update soon!
Fizzy Top Kyle 2006-06-20 ch 5,	abuseWow, only 14 reviews. These people don't know what they're missing! Awesome story. I was reading a bunch of these guy/guy stories, and they're all totally flat. It was like the same characters in every one only with different names and written by different people. Yours sticks out. A rose among the snow, if you will. And I started cracking up with the "I AM THE LORD" thing. I'm not religious, at all. But I was reading the bible for the alleged thing that said "gay is bad :(!" and it was like, saying "I AM THE LORD" after everything, like that had some type of influence. Like, "Do not eat sheep. I AM THE LORD" whoopee for you; youknow? I totally rambled and wrote a really long review that doesn't have much to do with the actual story, so sorry. I'm putting you on my alert list. Because you rock that much. :)

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