 the-raven's-star 2009-10-15 . chapter 9OMFG ah! i love it XD |
 Bleed The Dream 2009-10-04 . chapter 9Hot. I love our boy Sage here. Lol, there's so much crushing and potential romance going on I have no idea what's going to happen. XD Which is good. I like an unpredictable story.
Please update soon, I'm interested in finding out what happens. :D |
 animebaby2000 2008-09-16 . chapter 8CUTE:) good job , keep going :) |
 animebaby2000 2008-09-15 . chapter 1i find the fact that he has only talked to someone from his school that long in 4 years . thats just depressing. i hope that never happens to any one.:( |
 merrymowmow 2007-04-09 . chapter 8I was wondering when you're going to update? |
 jammi_gurl 2007-03-15 . chapter 8 heyhey! this story is great! I sorta expected 2 ppl to come straight out n like each other.. hahah but now i find like 3 ppl liking the same person.. ahh.. u noe.. probably it progresses into a love triangle? ahhaha or mayb there r 2 couples huh? ahhahah yeah well.. the plot keeps me thinking.. which is cool! ahah do update soon!! haha cya |
 SapphireIris 2007-02-13 . chapter 8Dance Dance Revolution!!
Hee hee, they're all good friends now. Now it's time for you to update again! Did I mention that I love your ch. titles, by the way? Tee hee. Nice twist, too, with the Jasper-devouring-everything. So get on with it, eh? And... update!
-SapphireIris |
 Gaki Toki 2007-02-10 . chapter 8WOOT I LOVE IT! Let's get to some three-some action already though. And I still don't know about Sage yet...he's kind of on my "iffy" side if you know what I mean.
Anyways, I'm so glad you updated! I'm always so psyched when people update I always have to review them ASAP...which isn't very fast sometimes but it'll do right? Haha.
Gaki |
 Jordan Storm 2006-11-13 . chapter 7interesting, please continue? please? it will be fun to see who gets Ashton in the end! |
 xAngel of SorrowX 2006-11-10 . chapter 7This was a cool chapter! Although I don't understand the title...it sounds like 'murder', to me. *looks it up online* OH! It's "misfortune", right? Well, what happened to Sage is pretty unfortunate... it was funny in the gym, though, when the two were being protective of Ashton and telling him all the precautions that he needs to take. I hope Sage gets better, Ashton doesn't get raped, and that you update soon! |
 Gaki Toki 2006-11-10 . chapter 7HEY! I love it when you mention me, I feel special.
Ren: Oh my...oh my...Sage, you need better friends. And I know why he lies so much! BECAUSE I HATE HIM!
Jason: You have issues.
Ren: Maybe he has a bad homelife. Oh well, update soon, we gotta go. |
 SapphireIris 2006-11-10 . chapter 7Aha!! We've got a little love square... no longer a triangle. I still want to know what's up with their eyes, though. And I think Sage deserved getting his ass beat. "Bad Sage!" hehe. Keep writing!!
-SapphireIris |
 SapphireIris 2006-11-04 . chapter 6Hello!
I like this story. And if I like it, it has to be good. I still want to know why their eyes are funky colored, though. Could you please get to that soon? Yes, I know I've been gone, but now I'm back. So ha! Now you HAVE to update!!
-SapphireIris |
 xAngel of SorrowX 2006-11-01 . chapter 6LMAO! Camdyn sounds awesome (if a bit weird...)! Poor Ashton...lol. This was a cool chapter! Awesomeness! I can't wait to read more, so please update soon!
You're a review whore, I'm an updated stories whore. we're even.
^_^ |
 Jordan Storm 2006-10-03 . chapter 6lol, cool stuff, please continue when you get the chance! |