liking the new narrative style...still with stark images...suits you even if the flow is a little rough...good stuff MLF

Wow...You are amazing. And I'm gonna be depressed all day now. This strikes me -the repricussions, the symptoms, are worse than the illness of war and loss. Very nice job, lovely wording ands rhyme scheme. And thanks for the review. Et ta francais n'est pas si mauvaise que tu sous-estime!