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Kira-Ta-Nay-Nay 2008-10-14 . chapter 10
T~T how could you do that you made me cry then my mom walked in and i looked stupid because i really couldn't tell her why i was crying...great story though i hope the sequel don't standpoint i will be putting a story up here soon hofully ^^;; anyway sorry for the spelling mistakes im a horrible speller
hot-caues-your-not 2007-07-16 . chapter 10
It is so sweet
Rubadub 2007-07-06 . chapter 10
Cliffhangers make me want to cream my pants...

And this ended with the mother of all cliffhangers. Kinda. But yeah. I'm glad you changed the ending to something more obscure and less cliche. It really added a more melancholy note to the whole thing.

Props for a nicely written and lengthy story that leaves the reader wishing for more!
iNSANEmoments 2007-02-06 . chapter 10
Oh, wow. That's a depressing ending. -_- Awe, but I love the story. ^_^ Cannot wait for the sequel. *Squeals*
Lady Psychic 2006-11-06 . chapter 10
This was a really good story. The ending was sad, but more realistic and less cliched than what you originally planned.
Prisoner-11 2006-07-24 . chapter 10
No! He can't get a new boyfriend...*cries* But I like the ending anyways *reads it over and cries again*
Back of Beyond 2006-07-24 . chapter 10
normally i would hate you for such an ending, but after reading what was supposed to happen, and the supposed sequel, i definitely like this version better...more realistic i guess XD well, amazing story, really enjoyed reading it, can't wait for the sequel!
Prisoner-11 2006-07-21 . chapter 9
Hm...I've been reading this for a while now...I just didn't review...T.T I want to know what's next!
hanakimi 2006-07-17 . chapter 8
Well...I just came across this story, and I couldn't stop reading it! Please update soon!
Midniteangel 2006-06-21 . chapter 8
Gah i love this story so much, i want to know what happend next though. i think you have talent in wrotomg amd i am on the edge for the next chapter
Hate In The Form Of Passion 2006-06-14 . chapter 8
NO! NOT THE LAST CHAPTER! NUHS! I DUN WUNNA READ! OMIGAWD NO! NO! DON'T TYPE IT! TYPE MILLIONS OF OTHER CHAPTERS! ;-;! JUST NOT THE LAST ONE! Okay I feel a little better that he's not with Haru. BUT STILL! WHO IS THIS MYSTERY PERSON THAT HE LOVES! SURELY IT'S KIYOSHI! IT HAS TO BE! OMIGAWD I WUNNA KNOW! Aww wittle Eien needs to comfort HarHar-chan!
Hate In The Form Of Passion 2006-06-14 . chapter 7
OH MY GOD! WHAT! WHAT! WHAT JUST HAPPENED! FUCK I'M SPEECHLESS DID THEY JUST...UH..UH! UH! NO! WAIT I UM UM! HEY WHAT?!
TheSiner 2006-06-13 . chapter 8
Oh...stupid boys ;)
Hate In The Form Of Passion 2006-06-11 . chapter 6
I KNEW IT! OR HALF KNEW IT! I KNEW SOMETHING! ;-;! Right?! I feel bad for Kaoru. I really hope he finds someone~! Oo~! I NAMED A PAIRING RIGHT! I think it's Haru and Eien but I dunno but Kaoru needs someone!
banea 2006-06-08 . chapter 7
^^ Wonderful story. I can't wait for the eighth chapter. You have such wonderfully developed characters, from the devious Haru to poor Kiyoshi, to Kaoru... I find it sad that I'm now, after seeing Shinobu, even briefly, with Haru, I find myself rooting for Kaoru/Kiyoshi. o.o

^^ Anywho, keep up the good work.
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