V powerful piece, really captures the emotions of it all. I like the ryhme scheme, too - creates a sense of innocence that I think some ppl stop seeing in that kind of situation.

I can feel the feeling behind these words and I like the line "River asks me to jump in,"

Having been close to suicide once myself, something i hope i'll never be tempted by again i know what it's like to feel you're worthless

there's a lot of feeling behind this

but never give up, there's always hopeyou just have to find it within yourself