his is such a simple poem that it's nice. The small amount of emotion in it was what made m read it besides the title.

i like this is simple and has simple lines and sometimes predictable is needed to get it done.

I like the line 'Stop this hellish dance.' All in all, a good poem.

I'm kind of an angst fan.

'wake me up inside' reminded me a bit too much of evanescence's little hit, 'bring me to life'. :O anyway, i think this could have been better. try not to use such predictable lines.

sorry, i hope you don't hate me or anything for this. no offence meant. :)