First of all, I would like to thank you for your reviews. They are the first I've had in some time and that means a lot to me. I am also glad that you found my observations constructive. Looking at your profile it seems that you and I have more than one thing in common, which I find to be an infrequent blessing. ;)

I can see that you have some very good ideas and meaningful concepts in your work. The ending of thie piece was especially good. I'm going to read more of your work these next couple of days and give you more accurate feedback whenever possible :)

Have a wonderful day.

I love the imagery, it's beautiful. I like the allusion to Romeo and Juliet. Great job.