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| Soul Of Music 2006-10-17 ch 1, | abusewhoa this is...amazing |
| Joseph Mises 2006-06-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really great poem... I really like it. What was your inspiration? Who's the man? |
| THE LAST zHERO 2006-06-21 ch 1, | abuseThats how I feel sometimes. Except...Um...A WOman without a name. By the way, what's your name?I think I might know you......answer in a review or something |
| Dawnella 2006-06-14 ch 1, | abuseThe assassin. Wow, again. As what seems to be usual, it flows easily and gracefully. It's really good. |
| searchlight 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abuseOh, mercenary. I love it. Reminds of an anime character I once saw...Was this REALLY your first poem ;) |
| Princess-anna57 2006-05-30 ch 1, | abuseHello! I like your poem! It's really well written. Excellent work, keep it up. In response to your pondering, we Aussies spell words english english with our own tweak too! *grins*, thanks for reviewing! Bye for now, and keep being awesome! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Siph Speigel 2006-05-22 ch 1, | abuseA great little poem, I believe it to be written from the heart. What it reminds me of is the character of Silas, if you've every read The Da Vinci Code. Yeah, it's in the news alot now, but it's a pretty good adventure book. But this poem fits right to that character. If this comes from the heart, I think you'd like Silas. |
| castelgard 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseuh.. i think ive read this already from deniable operator. good poem though.. |
| AmericanWriter2008 2006-05-19 ch 1, | abuseNot bad. It's good. Keep up the good work. |
| Nessuno 2006-05-13 ch 1, | abuseI like it. I like how you speak of your pride of something and call it what it is. No flowery words or imagery. I respect that. |
| Oh fuck this 2006-05-12 ch 1, | abuseThis seems to be written with less emotion than some of your previous pieces. I may be wrong though. I like it a lot, and it's short but to the point. Are you a Marine? It would make more sense if you were. - Owen and Mark |
| Amanda Richards 2006-05-10 ch 1, | abusei love this pome. please cheack out my new one. |
| O.r.i.g.i.n.a.l.isn't.My.st... 2006-05-09 ch 1, | abuseO.o..Wow, your first poem? (DaNg)... Your poem makes a lot of sense! The lines all set up each other, especially making a good ending. Great job. This was brilliantly(if that's a word) written- a devil from foregin lands, murderous skills give me pride, a pawn, a tool, etc- then a man without a name. It's because of his past and that his real emotion is so deep inside himself that he has no name- well something like that...Anyway, if this was your first poem. You are definetely a natural, and talented writer. Well written poem, bravo!^^ |
| Chris Conway 2006-05-04 ch 1, | abuse...So you've died? |
| Cait Street 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseoh man...This was your first poem?Its about ten times better than nything i've ever written!!Its really great. you really should get your work professionally published. |