Great flow, nicely done. Thank you for the kind review. Write on!

oh. I LIKE that one a lot. That's all I can really say. It's god.

I can totally relate to this! No one thinks I can cry, because I'm always so cheerful, and when I do, I have to do it alone, because it would ruin the way people see me. I just think it could flow a little better, with more imagery and flow. :) I like the new spin on an old subject. ^^ Keep writin'! `~bella~`