Oh, but aren't fevers fun? =P It's an interesting poem - kind of abstract. I like it.

By the way, my poem called "It's Pure Volume" has nothing to do with the website. I knew when I decided on that title that people would mistake the two. But thanks for the review!

♥Christine

this poem was nicely written. it was only a tad bit emo. too bad.;) it was really good though! (like usual!) keep it up!

Mr. Magic

The poem was good, but I love the way it seems very ethereal, sort of like you were...feverish. xD I guess that's to be expected, though, eh? I also like the idea, how one part of the day is yours, designed for you...this isn't religious, is it? The whole 'waters of life' thing threw me off a bit. Overall, yummy! Keep writin'! `~bella~`

Wow! Awesome work. Nice imagery and emotion. Maybe I should get a high fever sometime. lol.