intense, but good...it's nice how you answered the question...and the rhyme scheme flow is natural...so very good

Wow I like how that ended. I like the length and the format and... EVERYTHING! It was very well written .

Aww. This is so sad. I love the begining and the end. They really draw me in and stick this into my head. SO sad. Parts I loved:

"As I down the pills/ You just keep telling yourself/ That she’ll always be there." SO sad.

"I don’t freaking care." I can't explain it. I just love that ending.

This was great and I really loved it. It's so sad. Bravo.

this is very angry. but i like the part with the pills and the not caring.