|Reviews for Nothing Exists|
| Tikklz 10/3/07 . chapter 1
This poem seemed a little rougher than others of yours I have read. But I loved the way it started. "Calligraphy face" was SUCH a unique description. Really really neat. "You and I behind each eyelid." I also really liked the reference to calligraphy again, even though it's not referencing the subject exactly: "craving wet parchemnt dreams." Neat-O. Would be even better if you smoothed out the last half, that's where you seemed to stumble in your flow.