I absolutely love the style of this poem. It looks great, and well, it reads great, too. Especially the last line. I'm not entirely sure if I understand what it means, but then again, am I really supposed to?

woo... this is really beautiful. I'm not sure I understand it all but that's my fault not yours! hehe. Very pretty imagery - overall, it just so relaxing! :)

i really enjoyed this. it's a parody in itself with a satirical touch preluded with pretty, tranquil images. cool stuff.