This was just an incredible story. This last chapter left an especially fine tatse in my mouth. I loved his story and history. A thousand people...

Good job with this. It had a good storyline with the right amount of lurking creepiness to make a reader gape. This is so going on my favorites.

Claude's a total and complete douchebag. Yes, I find that to be the utterly perfect description.

Francois seems thirsty for power...or, at least, his rage does. Apparently he's a tad crazy, too, although I suspected that from the beginning.

This chapter got creepy--heart-racing creepy, in fact. Onto the final...

Wow, I could hardly see Francois marrying anybody after his accounts...he seem(ed) like a misanthropist, actually.

I like where this chapter went, and how the Recorder was stopped for a search...what will happen?

Wow, Francois had one hell of a childhood.

I like how you described his passion for the blade and his contempt for the practices of chivalry. It was...fiery, is really the best word I can find.

Perhaps, if I'm lucky, I'll be able to read all of it today.

It's nice to at last find something that is both well-written and entrances me. This prologue was interesting, and gave out the facts in an easy-to-absorb way which was relieving.

I guess the way to put it is: really A Grade stuff, and I'm going to keep on reading.

dude. guess who. *gill via a g* yes, i've stalked you here. have i mentioned that you have a very creepy imagination? very good, and very creepy. ^^ i rather enjoy creepy.i liked the format of this, how instead of a regular story it was one guy's ramblings seperated by another guy's comments on said ramblings. tiz unique. yes. brush over it a few times grammer/spelling wise, and you'll have a pretty darn good fic here. *hopes she can claim first review*