i think the title ties into the poem really well. Good choice

this sounds so much like a song to me, and a nice one at that. i like the phrase, "lukewarm joy that briefly shines". and i hope you don't feel alone, because you know you always have me. in all seriousness, i can be serious if you need me to be. but really, you are a fantastic poet, and i do not want to see any more reviewless poems! i demand that other people review your work!

honorata, on a crusade to grant reviews to the reviewless