Wow... I liked it, really good

wow, that was really good. hope you got a good grade on it.

wow, it's really good, i sure it's better than the one that i wrote for my report. good job and keep up the good work. you can really write good stories. i look forward to reading your other ones.

Hi there! Love your story! It has been deep for me and touched my heart in a way for it to be insperational! Hope you'll make another one! The ending is nice! Hope you have a good grade for it!

Interesting and thought provoking. Nice perspective on the reader and the 'light at the end of the darkness'. Kudos~ ^o^

It doesn't look that phoney to me. The words about hope were so true, and when I read this I remembered all the times I had sat by myself at lunch, when weeks before I had sat with my friends.

Not a bad story at all.

excellent story. it was pretty inspiring, although also (sorry to be a bit critical) slightly phoney sounding, if you see what I mean