Excellent. The carnival thread running through it works and lends it a surreal garish tone, but it's not overdone; it doesn't try to hard. Favorite lines?~and too blushing,

Something too entwined with you.

I like this idea of relating to carnival and the house of mirrors when we are distorted and in the need to be stimulated bad or good...nice piece

That reminds of Phantom of the Opera, sort of. You know? Have you ever watched that movie? But yeah, just suddenly... Which is cool.

I like it. reminds me of my life a bit. People can't be trusted. seriously. Even the ones who seem to love you more than life itself. In fact... those are the creepiest. *shivers*

dont you think it is fun to say idiosycranize?

probably slaughtered that

this piece has that sort of creepy clown rapists late at night at carnivals kind of thing

eerie carnivals at night = no good

This has a wonderful depth of emotion that makes the reader identify with the speaker so much. Very well written.