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Reviews For: Sweet Darkness

phantom-jedi
2006-10-26
ch 1,
You captured your thought well. I, for one, am more comfortable in darkness than light.

You might want to review a little bit of punctuation. Nothing major, just a suggestion.

Good job and keep writing!

phantom_jedi
sueb262
2006-05-01
ch 1,
this is lovely and heavy and hard and dark--beautiful.
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