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| phantom-jedi 2006-10-26 ch 1,   | You captured your thought well. I, for one, am more comfortable in darkness than light. You might want to review a little bit of punctuation. Nothing major, just a suggestion. Good job and keep writing! phantom_jedi |
| sueb262 2006-05-01 ch 1, | this is lovely and heavy and hard and dark--beautiful. |