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Khrysalis 2006-05-14 . chapter 1
So much packed into such a short peice. Hope and love and passion and terror and loss, and right back to hope, and something heavy to carry throughout a life that looks to become fairly eventful.

But still kind of lonely. The last lines, "Adel's final words", and placing the small things he left with her in the box on her dresser "as a reminder". He did assure her she is never alone; it's good she didn't forget.
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