Reviews for Embrace the Bomb - FictionPress.com

Someone 2006-08-10 ch 1,	That's hawt
Tree Climber 2006-05-12 ch 1,	I love the dialogue! One thing about this story, though, is the grammar. It's not exactly the worst that I've seen, but it's really not great, either. Go back and clean it up, and add more details into the content (I love details...they're what make any story seem real), and this looks like it will be a great story!