Reviews for eating my heart - FictionPress.com

Reviews For: eating my heart

Rivir 2006-09-15 ch 1,	** AWESOMEthats sew colhehehe^_^
theatrical rhapsodies 2006-08-06 ch 1,	I really enjoyed this poem. I have no criticism to offer. It's just an all around good poem. I loved it. Loves, theatrical rhapsodies
polka dots and addictions 2006-07-06 ch 1,	woh. This poem is so painful it seriously made me flinch. Its really beautifully written, 'mazing description, and almost horrible (I mean that in a good way ^^)in the content. Wonderful work. ~ifonlyitwassimple x
a lonely september 2006-06-28 ch 1,	i...like this too. it's very dark and gruesome, i flinched when i read certain parts, but that wouldn't have happened if it wasn't well written. you did a nice job describing this/these scene(s). the ending bit reminds me of something i wrote except it was a different action i did and different thing the other person... blah, i sound stupid. it was different, but the same basic concept.i like this poem. very well written. and you can really feel all the pain in it.
The Fourth Fate 2006-05-20 ch 1,	SO sad. It hits really hard, you know? The imagery was incredible. I think everyone has to write something like this at some point in their life... (Mine was "Burn Me" and I'm a really positive person). This was absolutely great and I love the ending. It was a little hard to read at first because it's so sad but it makes it all the more worth it in the end.
HauntedMisery 2006-05-09 ch 1,	Wow...this is just beautiful, every line, I love this piece! Sorry I haven't gotten around to reviewing, I'm so slow ^_^ Anyway, thanks for all ur reviews on Fallen So Far From Grace, I have worked ** that story and try to make it the best I can since its a touchy subject. Oh ya, vampire's slave toy and love is better and a more specific love scene? Ok ^_^ I'm just shy of posting it on here lol. OK, enough of my talk, great job on this poem!

Return to Top