that ending is horrible (not the way its written just the idea of that) nice repetition of the questions and the lonely child... sad and beautiful

OMG that last stanza is intense. This was so sad.

:(

Reads like a song. I like it.

But :(.

Wow that last line just kills the mood, no joke.

this is soo sad... *tears* i love it!keep writing.

Chilling.

The repetition is wonderful.

Thanks for the review!

its like a sad love song...i like it.its great. leaves you wanting to hug ur parents and tell 'em your sorry. u no?its great.~Liz

Oh... I want to hug the child and take it home with me. This was such an emotional writting and I totally wasn't expecting the end. Great job!

Thanks for the reveiw, glad you liked it.

This seemed strained in areas, and the rhyming at the end made me lose thought of what happened in the poem. Nice work, though.

Oh. haunting. I imagined how the child would say the ending, and it sound so innocent and the child doesn't really understand what's going on.

Repetition was nice; overall, very nice poem :)

sometimes i wish i had no parents... but then the pain cannot be compared and having what you wish for is not a good thing sometimes.

keep writing

I like your style, most of your poetry seems to flow well.

WoW! Loved this piece. The layout and flow are great, and the ending really makes it. Great work. Keep it up!