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Ahemait
2006-05-11
ch 1,
interesting and odd, but very good all the same. i like how you capitalized 'he' and 'him', and so on. it gives him more importance and charactiztion somehow. nevermind, i have no idea what i'm saying. anyway, it's still good.
burning in effigy
2006-05-02
ch 1,
Ohh... very creepy... it's nice how it's a poem made into a story

Haunting story about going to bed... I hope I don't have nightmares.. ha...
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