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| Ahemait 2006-05-11 ch 1, | interesting and odd, but very good all the same. i like how you capitalized 'he' and 'him', and so on. it gives him more importance and charactiztion somehow. nevermind, i have no idea what i'm saying. anyway, it's still good. |
| burning in effigy 2006-05-02 ch 1, | Ohh... very creepy... it's nice how it's a poem made into a story Haunting story about going to bed... I hope I don't have nightmares.. ha... |