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| dustytiger 2006-08-07 ch 1,   | wow, not a style i've seen before, and i wasn't sure it would work (i tend not to like things that don't have some kind of even-ness to stanzas) but this worked really well, and really makes the reader think, which is a feat considering the style you chose to write this in, great work i loved it, keep up the good work, thanx for the review and thank you for sharing |