lovely, just reminds me of the Father's love for us, especially when i read this on Good Friday

Oh my goodness. This is from now on my poem. DibS! haha this was incredible. Lovve it love it!

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wow, this is really good! I love this.

it's starts off so and hopeless even, and then it ends happily! yay! lol.

very good work.

Karrah

That is an awsome poem. I almost cried in the middle of the poem. You have an awsome way of expressing the poem. I give it three kudos. I always feel like that but I always make it through cause I know he will help me make it throug this world. Great job on the poem.

Beautiful

This reminds me of a couple things. First, it seems like a mother has had something happen and she is having to keep strong for her children. Then it reminded me of that scene from "Princess Dairies" (if you ever saw that) where Mia is crying and her mother is telling her it's okay to cry. Then, I realized something. This isn't really about something specific. (It may be for you, but it doesn't have to be.) This is about feeling like no one cares and then realizing that there is a God who loves you so deeply that you wonder why you ever doubted. Lovely.