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| Callisto Jean 2006-05-04 ch 1, | Ooh! Wow, what's that all about? Mysteries popping out of thin air in your prologue, but no hint as to the real plot! Amazing. I lurrve it! Keep on going! |
| Fighting Fire 2006-05-03 ch 1, | Yeah, it does move a little fast, but it shows promise. And... you know you can split up the chapters, right? So you could just use this first half as a prologue or something and split up where it starts at chapter 1. |