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Reviews For: Wait, Where's The World?

Callisto Jean
2006-05-04
ch 1,
Ooh! Wow, what's that all about? Mysteries popping out of thin air in your prologue, but no hint as to the real plot!

Amazing. I lurrve it! Keep on going!
Fighting Fire
2006-05-03
ch 1,
Yeah, it does move a little fast, but it shows promise. And... you know you can split up the chapters, right? So you could just use this first half as a prologue or something and split up where it starts at chapter 1.
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