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| Apollo x 2007-04-14 ch 1,   | i really felt this one for real it was just the right blend of hurt and dispair to draw me into it and feel what i was reading, |
| Alena D'Etoiles 2006-05-22 ch 1, | very descripive and vivid. i love it. |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-05-03 ch 1, | This is so beautiful. It was well written, and the formatting fits the poem. ALL SMILES :) XoXo |
| Oriel Vaughn 2006-05-03 ch 1, | First: reality check. If you care about petty details, which I do: last line of the fourth stanza lacks a space between "beneath" and "the" xD Then on to the praises! I LOVE your descriptive imagery! Your language is absolutely spellbinding. All the symbols of heartbreak, death, destruction in your second stanza - how on earth did you come up with all those! -in awe- It's such a sad poem, verging on morbid at the end, but it's really really good. Keep writing! :) |
| Penguins and Popsicles 2006-05-03 ch 1, | I love your poem. And your name. :) |