Vague, but not too vague, so it's good. I liked it, really. Although, I felt a little lost around the first part, felt like it could be simpler.

Hm. Also, nothing big but, I think I noticed a couple of errors (doubled/dropped words) here and there.

Hmm, what to say...

Deliciously beautiful and detailed imagery empowers your story, giving it an almost-fairy tale quality (which I think you were aiming for and which in my opinion you've achieved). I found myself reading it again and again just to savor it some more.

You are an amazing writer... Beautiful. That was simly beautiful.

Very poetic and beautiful. Flows like water, rich with detail and a subtle rhythm.

fantastic, phantasmic, either way you like, incredible, memorable, and haunting. a beautiful, well-polished piece.

Your work is entricately wrought with as much aggressiveness as delicacy. You've woven many myths into this story, and just as many epics. Your work may very well be the poison that the story speaks of because it is, unfortunately, or perhaps fortunately, commited to my memories. You've mastered this piece as I hope you will with many others.

Wow...rich with amazing descriptions that truly come alive. Great work!