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| Blehk 2006-06-13 ch 1,   | This is a quaint little story. I'm a musician, too, so I can really relate to this person. Anyway, I absolutely love your second to last paragraph. Love love love. |
| Shadow Gryphon 2006-06-06 ch 1, | Gah. Sounds so much like the stage fright I used to have. Nice place to end it, where we don't know whether or not he plays well, just that he does. I quite like the way his thoughts change from happy to nervous and then to determined, and especially "goddammit if he wasn't the one holding the holy scepter." It just fit so well. |
| B. Cotton 2006-05-17 ch 1, | It's good to see this up after hearing you read this last night. It and the Pawnshop one were my favorites. The emotion in here is raw and real. Everyone can symphasize with the guitarist, everyone has felt this sort of nervosa. And you lay that out in the manner appropriate for it. In short; freakin' awesome writing, yo. |
| Lauren Wolfe 2006-05-09 ch 1, | Woah...kewl! Wow! Amazing write! Keep it up! ^-^ |