I totally love this! It's awesome... Very descriptive and suspenseful. Great job.

A very good, suspenseful story. The train-of-thought writing was perfect. The ending was unexpected and very fitting- we spend the entire story hearing his arrogance adn then the ending puts him in his proper place. This needs to be a longer story, I think. You could easily expand upon it, perhaps showing how she was admitted to the asylum. The only problem I had with this was when the doctor calls the girl a 'son of a bitch'. Most people would just say 'bitch' when referring to a girl. A minor complaint in an overall good piece.

amazing story! i love this! -favs-

Heather-This is so good! Way better than mine! Although I think both of us think the same some times. Keep up the great work though! zeusfluff

PS. You know it's really me... :)

Well, I wasn't expecting that ending. Though when she started saying 'Htead semoc,' I did figure out what she was saying. Well, you certainly do have a talent with horror and suspense. I'm actually jealous of it! But whatever. A very well-written story indeed. Definitely a favourite of mine! Keep up the great work and write on!