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| ~monkyy109 2008-12-04 ch 6,  | hey... can you please update? its kinda been awhile and im hoping you dont just leave this story cause i really like it |
| da 2008-11-29 ch 6, | update PLEASE IM BEGGING |
| MidnyghtVampyrezz 2008-11-09 ch 6,  | I loved it! I think this is a great idea so please hurry and update soon! |
| firefly 2008-11-01 ch 6, | i hope sam and dave end up together |
| ;] 2008-10-12 ch 6, | im dying to know what sam is wearing. Update soon! |
| BeingMyself 2008-10-05 ch 2, | Hm... I know you've already edited everything but you still might want to get a beta with English as their first language. Sometimes you miss a word and it makes the sentence awkward. Other then that, I'm looking forward to getting to know your characters :). |
| CLOUDSTRIFELOVER4ever 2008-08-29 ch 6, | getting interesting...cant wait to read more! update soon! Peace:) |
| babygal4real 2008-08-26 ch 6, | lovd dis chapta dave kinda annoyed me and matt as well and aaron is so protective lol. i cnt wait 4 d next chapta and hw can dave love kerri and still cheat on her his idea of love is warped |
| Den-KitStock 2008-08-26 ch 6, | This was great! The 'fight' in the car as really fun and ah, I can't wait to find out what Sam is going to dress up as! And I don't the long reply! |
| righthere431 2008-08-25 ch 6, | ohohoho i cant wait to see what dave's costume is =] |
| righthere431 2008-08-25 ch 5, | =/ poor sam...but again... really amazing story lol im only saying little cuz i know ill say a lot about this chapter so ill just say the story is amazing =] |
| righthere431 2008-08-25 ch 4, | lol omg... so they next time they meet is right now lol so funny and awesome =] and i hope that kalli and aaron get together... i dont like annah lol |
| righthere431 2008-08-25 ch 3, | lol now he knows the little thing =] but really awesome and great chapter =] |
| righthere431 2008-08-25 ch 2, | oh juicy juicy juicy =]] love it love it love it lol ill stop now =] |
| righthere431 2008-08-25 ch 1, | ohohoho so juicy even in the first chapter...i love it lol |