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| Tatharwen 2006-05-04 ch 1,   | This was sad...but really pretty. It reminds me of a certain manga (wink,wink)... I love the way you start each stanza with the 'who, what,where' questions. Very sweet; keep writing! ~Tatharwen Took~ |
| Youkai Author 2006-05-03 ch 1, | Move "this was something I thought of late at night" below the happy little divider line. Otherwise it throws off the poem. I love the parallelism of the question words and the two following lines. I like it. |