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| Staphen 2006-10-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseHmm, yeah. I looked at your other reviews. Seems I might have been a bit harsh. Anyways, I like this one. :) |
| Forgotten Valkyrie 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abusethat flows very nicely. i like it a lot. it sounds very realistic too. yay! |
| Sagia 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abuseOh my goodness! I really like this one! I like your wordplays, they're really effective! It has many feels to it... romantic, forlorn, hopeful... really well done! Keep writing awesome stuff! |
| Youkai Author 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abusex3 Lovely! Then again, I might be slightly biased by my feelings for the song...ever so slightly. Anyways, there's too much space between the stanzas. I suggest editing it to a one-lined break between them, otherwise it seems as if you're trying to make your poem longer. |