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Reviews For: Send Me a Song
Staphen 2006-10-03 . chapter 1
Hmm, yeah. I looked at your other reviews. Seems I might have been a bit harsh. Anyways, I like this one. :)
Walking in Xanadu 2006-08-13 . chapter 1
that flows very nicely. i like it a lot. it sounds very realistic too. yay!
Sagia 2006-07-26 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness! I really like this one! I like your wordplays, they're really effective! It has many feels to it... romantic, forlorn, hopeful... really well done! Keep writing awesome stuff!
Youkai Author 2006-05-03 . chapter 1
x3 Lovely! Then again, I might be slightly biased by my feelings for the song...ever so slightly.

Anyways, there's too much space between the stanzas. I suggest editing it to a one-lined break between them, otherwise it seems as if you're trying to make your poem longer.
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