Oh my goodness! I really like this one! I like your wordplays, they're really effective! It has many feels to it... romantic, forlorn, hopeful... really well done! Keep writing awesome stuff!
x3 Lovely! Then again, I might be slightly biased by my feelings for the song...ever so slightly.
Anyways, there's too much space between the stanzas. I suggest editing it to a one-lined break between them, otherwise it seems as if you're trying to make your poem longer.