this reminds me of a time i had when i tried to ask a girl out and she kept denying me and said that "i just want you as a friend", but that friendship broke. sad isn't? but anyways, this is a good piece.

Nice. I can definitely relate to the "And I hate it when you look at me. But, I hate it even more when you look away" part.

You keep writing and I'll keep reading, k?

-me

I love this. Your work is so real, it's amazing. I love the line: "Wearing too much skin". It's real and beutiful and there. Oh, and unrequited love sucks magorly. I'm sending bushels of girl support (if you need it.)

-Insane Rassbery

P.S. About your review... (well it made sence in my head, it just sort of came out that way and I can't really explain it so I probably should delete it before I confuse any one else). And I'm not gay, I was just writing it as if I was.

Another great poem, good job. I like it a lot.

That reminds me of my current situation. I like this.