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myalteredego 2007-02-05 ch 1,	abuseThis is very very good. I love the description and the imagery- it's quite literally as if you're painting a picture with your words, and that's how poetry should be. I like the description of her as a Gemini (I'm one two!) and how you should all her emotions-happy and sad- rather than one particular moment. It made it all the more beautiful. Wonderful! And no, I don't have pink hair. My mother would kill me if I got my hair so much as highlighted. So, I'm stuck as a brunette. Yes, Part Two is in the making. It is called The Grief, and it would have been finished a few days ago except I lent my poem folder with the only copy I had of the half-way done part two to a friend to read, and I'm waiting on it's return. Check within the week- it'll be up soon. Thank you for reviewing!
Strings 2006-08-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseI really liked this poem- the style you used really fit what you were saying. Casual, yet deep. There are a few sentences that are a bit odd, but otherwise I think you did a very good job with it. -Strings
Anime Freakizoid 2006-08-23 ch 1,	abusehey, thanks for reading my story midnight concerto, i reall appreciated your criticism. this was a great poem, great detail about this person. keep up the great work, hope to hear from you again.-anime freakizoid
Rapturous Halo 2006-07-17 ch 1,	abuseThe rhythm in this poem seems to flow in a rather urban tone almost. I can feel the emotion and truth of the words emenate. It paints a similar picture of one of my friends for me. It's as though you captured the emotion of the new 'normal', as the poem is appropriately titled. I quite enjoyed reading it. ~FTM~
Vohn Exel 2006-05-19 ch 1,	abuseWow, great poem. I really liked it, and I'm not much for poetry. It had a great flow, thought he sentences were kinda hazy at times. I liked it, and I think you've got some real talent there. If I knew the person that you were writing about, I think I'd want to tell her that it'll all be ok and give her a hug or something, lol. All in all great poem :D.
Tikvah Ariel 2006-05-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou seemed to me to attach onto a lot of words in this poem. 'But', 'normal', and 'because' are the ones that I caught. I can understand the middle one, but the other two... It was a nice poem though, and depsite looking like it was sentences broken into a poem it had good flow. Didn't seem like there was a lot of need for it to go on long as it did, but other then that I liked it

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