beautiful?gold?genious?

pick an adjective, any adjective.

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_Alix_

"My soul is yours even in affliction

I take you as my silent addiction

My name spoken remains broken" I love that, it's the most beautiful thing I have ever read. Pure, perfect and still simple. Bravo!

Hello! Thanks for the review/s (haven't checked them all yet _)I liked this and the set out was good...what i'm trying to say is that i LOVED it!

Ahh...is that what inspiration sounds like?..I have some writing to do

I will admit it was a little over the top with drama, and the line, "look at our torn nation" sounds random. It isn't random it does have a point to it. Thanks everyone for the reveiws.

LOVE YOU always!

It is well-worded and well-intentioned, but it also is far too dramatic without much cause for it.

The line "look at our torn nation" seemed a little random, but other than that I thought it was pretty neat...

Wow, I love the choice of words you use and the strong imagery in your poem. Very amazingly powerful and heart-felt. Beautifully written. Keep writing! :)

so is the "missing" line at the end of the second stanza to symbolize the loss? if so, I must say... extraordinary. thanks very much for the review by the way, please let me know what you think of some of my other things when/if you have a chance to.

You think I have talent? Compared to this? No way. This is awesome. Brillant. Your vocabulary is incredibly well put in this and it flows so well... you are insane; I am not good YOU are WICKED! lol but thank you :o) lol Keep it uP!

beautiful job, as always. i love to read your style

i liked the personal touch you gave at the end, dropping a name like that. the summary attracted me. "kiss me so i can taste the veracity". rhymes, relates...simple. it's give you a story, i guess.

always & forever,

Gyn

Very beautiful... everything flowed so well, and every line was just as interesting as the next... also loved the ending