Hahaha, I like that, "fruity and vaguely alcoholic." It made me laugh.

So Sei'ne knew her from before, unbeknownst to poor Raine? Hah! I can completely understand why he was all bewildered. Indeed, "what the hell" for him! Hahaha. Laughing again!

The brothers are so different, I love it! I mean, their style is in complete opposition!

Hahaha- Mina, you're too witty-- Poor Saleen, being called a weird chick just because she's not a drooling fangirl! *snort* And her truck is hilarious. A "cowboy's wet dream, hm?" Heh heh heh.

Aww, I really like this line: "He was sitting next to one of the biggest influences he’d ever had, and she was oddly normal." It's so sweet. Just makes me want to glomp them.

Hey, wait- It's over?! Where's the next chapter? Aww, shucks. I want to read more! I am enthralled with these characters- they're very intriguing. All of them are so incredibly unique and in contrast with each other.

Ah, now I know how to properly say the names... that's so helpful. I wasn't sure. And Sei'ne is a lot line Shawn? I see! As for Saleen... *love*

YOU GOT YOUR DEGREE!! CONGRATULATIONS!! *flying glomp attack* I'm now extremely envious of you. But also proud, too! Good luck with your MASTER'S degree. Goodness, that's great, Ms. Smarty Pants!

*love love* I adore your writings, Mina! I hope you do have more time now that it's summer. But I know how the dreaded real life has a way of always intervening. Anyway, (speaking of life) I think it's about time we had a round of e-mailing, don't you think? Again, I've missed you! It's so sad... all I can do is send you rambling disjointed reviews early in the morning.

Okay, okay, enough pestering, yes? *huggle*

Talk to you soon, Mina!

Love, Inky

MINA! Finally, I return to the land of computerdom! I've missed you!! And now, I get to read the goodies! Excellent, excellent... onwards I go!.

Oh, sweet. I love the names you come up with. Saleen is love. And I wish my laptop "bleeped in sleepy greeting" (lovely description, as always!). My lappy usually blasts the living hell out of my ears.Goodness! She has hypsophobia and lives on the twentieth floor?

Mina, you outdo yourself! This : "They rolled out of her fingers, peacefulness spreading like hot tea through her whole body" is spectacular! How I love reading your wonderfully illustrative style. So good, Mina. It just seems so natural. Oh my, and this one "His thoughts tumbled out of his lips, battered and almost indistinguishable through the curl of his western European accent," is just as beautiful. *love*

Aww, it's fantastic how they first met. She's so witty, and Raine is HOT! He thought she was a fangirl... but she showed him. So cute! I must know more.

Ah, so this was for your writing class? You will have to e-mail me and tell me how that Creative Writing class went! Obviously it's been helpful! Or are you just amazing...? Alright, no more teasing, I can't wait to read the next chappy, so I'm moving on!

*love* Wonderful, Mina!

Luff.

Am instantly addicted, like always.