thanks for the review (: i spaced out the words to try out something new; didn't want to stick to the same old format again. my poems are starting to blend into one another. anyway, i love this poem. [and the bullet is in the gun with your name carved into it, and the tears never-ending.] that was really sad. the tears never-ending. it's simple but it evokes ): lots of ):

dark and beautiful.. bravo.. i have a poem almost like the topic of this one.. anyway, thanks for the review! hope you'd keep reading my work and keep on writing!

Oh... that's sad... and I can relate... somehow.

I really liked the second stanza because it's where I really felt the strong emotions, and you wrote those emotions well.