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Therese 2008-05-29 ch 25, anon.	abuseBest general/romance story i've read in a long while. It had all but the perfect dramatics in it, the awaited moments for a spark of romance, and you did it all so well. Thanks for the story and sharing your inspiration.
Lovedward48 2008-05-18 ch 25, anon.	abuseOuh! I'm crying really hard right now!! I love this story! I even loved the ending but it's so sad! sob Raoul is awesome! He and Lois didn't even come close to kissing but you could feel the chemistry! I want more!! It can't be over already... Cat's paw is very well written! You can be proud of yourself! You can sympathize with the characters pretty easily and you like them right off. But I'm wondering what happend to the pendant-shaped quartz crystal? Shouldn't it somehow help Lois find what she was looking for(whatever that was but I assume it was something to help Raoul stay in the real world) I love those corny happily ever afters but the story makes up for the kinda melancholic ending! So, now I'm not crying anymore but there's huge smile plastered on my face! :)
Tandrian 2008-05-08 ch 25,	abuseThis was a very interesting and different story to read. :) I just finished and although I find the ending sad (is a sucker for happy endings) I understand that not much could be done in their case. I just hope that when Lois dies they will be together. Thank you for writing this little gem. ^^
Sercet Night 2008-04-25 ch 25,	abuseYour story is amazing! I love everything about it. And I love Dory, "Chocolate bunnys." XD. Raouls awesome! The ending was sad. But I loved every single page! I hope you write more wonderful stories, I'll be waiting. ;)
D. Nekura 2008-02-27 ch 25,	abuseThis was such a sad and lovely story! I both hate and love romance that 'can never be', so I'm torn between loving and hating your story ^_~ In a good way though! The characters were brilliant, and I look forward to reading more from you.
teenqueen21 2008-02-21 ch 1,	abuseI loved this story. The ending was. . . sad, but perfectly realistic. There is one thing which doesn't add up, in the 8th chapter, Lois manages to pluck a strand of hair from Raoul, but in the later chapters when she tries to touch him her hands go straight through, so how she was able to touch him in this instance? And by the way, ghosts are supposed to be made of ectoplasm.
Lady Robin 2008-01-28 ch 25,	abuseT~T cries ... I miss Raoul. Great ending and awesome story! I so will buy a copy if you ever publish it!=^.^=
lips.of.an.angel 2008-01-21 ch 25,	abusewow...its ended and i feel like crying...oh well we have to face the reality right? wel it was an awesome story and you bought the emotions in me by your writing...and yeah i would surely miss lois, raoul and dory..good work! :)
Pretty Girls Make Graves 2008-01-21 ch 25,	abuseI have followed this story the entire time it's been written...I can't believe it's been two years! And that it's finally done. I absolutely loathe the ending and love it at the same time. I'm sure you can guess why. And I admire that you ended that way. Most people become too afraid to anger people and finish with a happy ending that's forced. But you stayed true to the story and finished in a way that fit perfectly. Your writing has progressed a lot throughout the entire story and you must be very proud. It's excellent. Thank you.
burning in effigy 2008-01-21 ch 25,	abusei'm 99.5% sure i've never left a review for your story. if i'm wrong about my statement, then i need more sleep or tea or both. anyways.. i usually don't review stories until they've been completed or are near completion. to get back on track... very very interesting storyline. unique in a way and completely gets people's attention. bittersweet ending. i guess all of us should have expected that. i mean, the guy is dead. and it would be too strange, not to mention a little disturbing, if he suddenly came back alive. personally, really liked the ending; there was some closure and it didn't break my heart (thank god.) i'll surely be missing the adventures of lois and raoul (haha) excellent story :-)
Moonlight Tigress 2008-01-20 ch 25,	abuseaww that was such a sweet ending!! i loved every second of these last two chapters, and in a way i kind of wish it hadnt ended. either way i really enjoyed your story, it had me captivated at the beginning and it didnt let me go until the ending. youre a brilliant author :)
arachibutyrophobia 2008-01-20 ch 25,	abuseI've been meaning to catch up with this story. Way to make me cry. That's all I can say right now.
eurtreve 2008-01-20 ch 25,	abuseWhat a sad ending.
Kanilla 2008-01-20 ch 25,	abuseGod. I'm crying. Seeing the end of this story hurt more than I thought it would. I love bittersweet endings, but this was maybe a little too much even for me. But it's perfect. It really is. Especially the "thank you" he left her there at the end. I'm going to miss reading this, dearly. -Kanilla
MZ PEACHESZZ 2008-01-20 ch 25, anon.	abusei've stuck with this story since the beginning and...it was a beautiful story, very well written. But i don't know...i've always been a sucker for happy endings. I know that this story is 904832094832 times better written than your last one...but for some reason, I just feel very bereft..i guess, after all this, i just hoped that somehow, surpassing the boundaries of death and existence, crossing the threshold between reality and fiction, that Raoul and Sybil would be together- permanently, in physical form. You made it work for your other story even when it seemed out of reach, impossible and I thought it could happen for this too...maybe a sequel? i know you probably think this is the perfect ending or you don't want to venture out into writing more into this story, but maybe a small, REALISTIC short epilogue that highlights hope? I really don't feel like reading anything of yours just because i'm afraid that i will become too attached to the characters and the ending will leave me..empty...think about it, okay? maybve like an alternative, 5 years into the future...anyways, good luck with everything.

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