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| Ripped wings of a Butterfly 2006-12-22 ch 1,   | wow.. beautiful.. I like it! ur poem is good! Ü |
| Etherealia 2006-08-17 ch 1, | Hi Dana, I can completely relate to the feelings in this poem...sometimes the world is just so chaotic, we just don't know how to handle it. You've a nice rhythm in your poem here...I like the simplicity of your diction and the urge each line seems to give until one arrives at your core thought. Nice work! p.s. Thanks for your review on my poem, "Ode to the Tree"! ;) ~Etherealia |
| Out-Of-Reality 2006-07-02 ch 1, | It's as if you're having a converation with yourself as you wrote it, I liked it alot. |
| White is a Sin 2006-05-17 ch 1, | I especially liked this one and the last line really tells somehting...don't know what LOL!! Thanks again ^_^ |
| lordelfy 2006-05-16 ch 1, | weird but neat, great job |
| love-is-hate 2006-05-14 ch 1, | wow this is really good!! i love the way you put the words between the verses and the words you chose! |
| poorPIKLE 2006-05-10 ch 1, | Wow this is good, im honored you took time to review ME =] this poem has an emotional impact and has many things i can relate to. keep the good work up. |
| Darkened1 2006-05-10 ch 1, | Nicely depressing. I am sorry that that's how you feel though. |
| Amethyst Horizon 2006-05-09 ch 1, | i like this poem, although it wasn't what i expected. the title drew me in and i expected something different i guess, but i like what you did with it. great write! |
| Storm December 2006-05-09 ch 1, | Oh, I love this! I really like what it's saying and the message in it. The last stanza is my favorite! And thank you so much for reviwing my poem! TTFN! ;) |
| cornered.sensations 2006-05-08 ch 1, | I love this, I can relate to getting so caught up in the world that you've lost yourself. Good job on describing this, also I thought the italics worked really well. Nice piece, I really enjoyed it. |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-05-08 ch 1, | sometimes i feel exactly the same as this. well described emotions. keep writing! |
| CELESTIAL*VISIONARY 2006-05-07 ch 1, | Don't forget, Dana. I've felt like that before. That pretty much sums it up. Keep writing. Constance |
| castelgard 2006-05-04 ch 1, | oh this is sad, but still good. nice job with the poem.. i can really feel the emotions going on beneath the words.. awesome job! |